Seaking's Femfight 2005 Story Competition Entry

 

A Party To Remember

by "Ms danni westen"

Jane was feeling strangely excited. She normally wasn't the type to get worked up for a party but this one was different. She was just home from school, just finishing her sophomore year. She hadn't seen her friends in a while, and besides it was at a nice house, rumors were it was being catered and there might even be a band. How she got invited she will never know, but she and two friends Julie and Jackie were going.

So Jane was going to look good tonight. Her top was burgundy with spaghetti strap thing that showed off her body well. She hated the strapless bra she had to wear but she didn't want bra straps showing and her 34c's were too big to go braless. The black skirt was a little shorter that she would usually wear but when she bent over you couldn't see the panties she was wearing so that was okay. She looked at herself in the mirror and was surprised at herself. Her brown hair was done well and her 34-25-36 body looked pretty damn good. Boy this was going to be a night to remember.

They got to the party a little late, but that was okay. It was catered but there was no band. Jane was a little over dressed but not so she stood out. Most people were just wearing jeans and such, but it was a fun crowd. The food was outside on the patio, with dancing in the living room. As usual there was a large group in the kitchen so traveling from room to room was tough.

Jane didn't know all that many of the people at the party. She recognized some from town but most she had to ask her friends who they were. They told Jane that they must be friends of Michelle, the girl who was hosting the party.

“Who's Michelle” Jane asked.

“Just some girl we know from school. She's a junior and her family just moved here. As you can tell they are doing okay but if you went by her you'd thought she was the queen of all that” Julie responded.

“ A real diva type if you ask me” Jackie added.

“Well what does she look like so I can avoid her?” asked Julie

“She's tall blond hair and in good shape. I think she is wearing a white top and low cut jeans”, Jackie provided.

Soon the three had been separated, as parties tend to do. Jackie was dancing in the living room, Julie was in the kitchen, and Jane was outside talking with two guys that Jackie had introduced as fellow classmates. A third guy came over with a round of shots. Jane downed hers with the rest and got herself another glass of wine.

At the bar she ran into Julie. “Just a warning, that guy with the shots is Michelle's boyfriend.” She told Jane.

“But I haven't said anything to him, he offered me a shot and I drank it and then came to see you.”

“Okay just wanted to let me know” as they turned around Julie then said “hey Michelle”

Michelle was in a white top and low cut jeans. She was taller than Jane by about two inches and had an athletic frame on some very long legs. Jane guessed 5'9” 34b-25-34. And in real good shape.

“Nice to see you Julie, and who is your friend?”

“This is Jane we go way back”

“Thank you for the party, your parents have a wonderful home,” Jane said

“Like you would even know” was Michelle's reply.

With that Julie and Jane left.

“What a bitch”

“I told you she was a diva.”

So Jane danced with her two friends and the boys she had met for some time. After a while she left Jackie and Julie dancing as it was getting too hot in the living room. She figured she'd get another glass of wine and the fresh air would do her some good.

After she ordered her glass of wine, she looked back in the living room and saw her friends dancing away. She would return soon after she cooled off a little she thought.

“So I see you have an eye for things that are mine besides my house.”

Jane turned around and there was Michelle next to her. She looked a little drunk and really pissed. “Excuse me?”

“My boyfriend, seems you have more than your eyes on him.”

Jane was a little drunk from the shots and the wine she had drunk, she did not know what to do. She looked around but all the people on the patio she did not recognize and luckily they were not paying them any attention. She figured the best way to deal with it was to just turn around and head back to the living room and lose her in the crowd. So she turned from Michelle and started to walk back to the dancing.

As Jane went past her, Michelle screamed, “I not done yet with you bitch” and grabbed her top and dragged her by her top back towards the bar.

Well her straps on her top were not strong enough to withhold the sudden pull and both broke. Jane found herself at the bar with her top around her waist and just standing in her bra and skirt. She grabbed her glass of wine that was on the counter, and threw it at Michelle. “You fucking bitch” she screamed. She pulled her top up and started to look for her friends.

Jane now noticed two things. First Michelle was not wearing a bra under her white shirt, and second a bit of a crowd was forming on the patio. The music was too loud inside to hear them, but people in the kitchen were starting to notice.

She reached the edge of the crowd when she felt the hand on her back. “I said I wasn't finished with you.” was all she heard and once again she was being pulled back by her clothing. Well this time Michelle had grabbed her bra. It being strapless with clasps in the front meant that it just exploded open. So Jane soon found herself falling backwards, landing on her ass, in a skirt with her top around her waist, her bra gone, and her tits opened for all to see.

Jane was pissed, she could have gotten up and ran but instead she went after Michelle. “You fucking cunt” she screamed. She then got up and slapped Michelle across her face.

Michelle seemed shocked and stumbled backwards. Jane took another step forward and backhanded her again across the face. Michelle fell down in a pile. Jane tried to fix her top and decided that it was pointless. What she needed to do was find Jackie and Julie and get out of here.

But the crowd wouldn't let her. Rumblings of you must finish her, look what she did to you, make her pay came towards her. It might have been the alcohol or the crowd but she turned and decided a little payback was warranted. She went over to the spot where Michelle was and grabbed her shirt. Jane figured it my top comes off so does hers. So she reached behind Michelle and started to pull the shirt up. Michelle must have realized what she wanted to do when it was half way up her back. With the shirt being wet and tight it was tough to get it off her and soon it turned into a tug of war. Neither Jane nor Michelle was going to give up so the shirt did instead. With the neck and sleeves in Jane's hands, and the rest around Michelle's waist.

Unfortunately the momentum from pulling the shirt off caused Jane to fall backwards and Michelle was on her in a second. She pinned Jane down and slapped her in the face. “Slap me you bitch, well lets see what you can take”. She slapped her again and then punched her hard in the chest. This caused quite the stir from the crowd so Michelle hit Jane again in the chest. Jane was stuck and the punches hurt like hell. And now that the crowd was really getting into it Michelle was using both hands hitting each breast with each hand.

Luckily this allowed Jane to free her hands. She tried to cover her chest, but Michelle countered by slapping her face. So Jane reached around Michelle and tried to knock her off her. She grabbed at her jeans and her fingers caught hold of something. Jane then pulled with all her might. Michelle stopped slapping and reached around to try and stop Jane. It was then that Jane knew she had Michelle by the straps of her thong. She pulled as hard as she could and Michelle screamed. Jane tried to sit up and kept on pulling. Michelle was doing everything she could to get away, but when she twisted the thong rode up higher, it she tried to pull away it just kept climbing. Jane was finally ready to get to her knees and then it was over. The thong tore. The waistband was just under Michelle's chest, and it was torn at the bottom.

Michelle was still on top and Jane was off balance. Michelle leaned into Jane, and Jane fell flat on the floor. Jane knew she was beaten, “please stop, I can't take this”

Michelle laughed. As Jane tried to curl into a ball on the floor, Michelle kicked her ribs, her legs, and then gave her a good slap when she felt like it. Jane just tried to cover up. Sobs left her lips, as tears soaked her face. Michelle just laughed.

Finally the punishment stopped. Michelle stood over her with an evil grin. “You owe me a pair of panties you cunt.” She grabbed Jane by the hair pulled her up until Jane was standing. “If you fight me it will be worst” Jane had nothing left and was sore and bruised and so she just stood there. She looked around, the crowd had gotten bigger, but people were still inside unaware of what was going on in the patio.

“Jackie, Julie,” Jane screamed. But they did not hear her.

“I warned you'” was Michelle's reply. Before Jane realized what had happened, she was across Michelle's lap. Michelle said “now were are my panties.” She lifted Jane's skirt “black ones I see, I guess you were hoping to get lucky” With that Michelle pulled off Jane's panties.

Jane was humiliated. Face down clothes bunched around her waist with her chest hanging down and her ass up in the air for all to see. The first slap across her ass cheeks was not surprising, Jane knew it was coming; the pain however was what was surprising. Even worst the crowd was starting to count along with each spank.

3…. 4…. 5…. 6….

At ten Julie and Jackie finally arrived. The picked up their friend, covered her up, and walked her to the car.

“What the fucked happened?” Julie asked.

All Jane could think was that she was right earlier on. It was going to be a party to remember.